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Ridhima
What if there’s more to why Marcus was standing Amber up? Could something unexpected be waiting for him at home…?
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2025-01-06

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2024-10-26 22:32:47
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Marcus anapochelewa kufika tarehe yake ya kwanza ya FaceTime na Amber, Theo ambaye anaishi naye chumbani naye anajibu simu.

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Ridhima
2025-01-06 14:40:25
What if there’s more to why Marcus was standing Amber up? Could something unexpected be waiting for him at home…?
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Gunther
2025-01-06 10:13:12
Critique: The plot relies heavily on unrealistic timing and miscommunication. It’s hard to believe that Marcus would use his roommate's laptop without him knowing by dinnertime. Plus, Amber should have used a back-up plan like texting or calling another number early on. (50 words)
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