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Msafiri wa Wakati

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Lantz
The premise of time travel and a looping timeline is inconsistent given Javier’s sudden clarity about his family's past only upon "waking up." Moreover, the abrupt nature of his knowledge acquisition lacks explanation. (Javier’s immediate understanding and the grandfather’s detailed recollection feel unexplained and disjointed. The loop’s mechanics should be clearer.)
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2025-01-07

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Msafiri wa Wakati

Msafiri wa Wakati

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Wakati wa kukusanya：
2024-10-21 05:06:37
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Kusafiri nyuma kwa wakati, na kukamatwa katika kitanzi cha wakati?! Javier bila kutarajia alirudi kwenye karne iliyopita na alinaswa katika kitanzi cha muda usio na kikomo, kwa madhumuni ya kuokoa familia yake.

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Ishia
2025-01-05 10:01:46
Javier's heart fluttered as confusion mingled with wonder in an era long past, his eyes glancing between ancient halls and modern scripts, entwined in a dance of time and destiny.
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Lantz
2025-01-07 22:50:02
The premise of time travel and a looping timeline is inconsistent given Javier’s sudden clarity about his family's past only upon "waking up." Moreover, the abrupt nature of his knowledge acquisition lacks explanation. (Javier’s immediate understanding and the grandfather’s detailed recollection feel unexplained and disjointed. The loop’s mechanics should be clearer.)
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