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Mfalme Askari asiye na rika

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The introduction sets up intense personal motivation for revenge, but the plot immediately diverges focusing on the group's dynamics instead of the protagonist’s actions or perspective. This disconnect弱化了主角的复仇动机，导致故事焦点不够明确。建议尽快引入 Xiao Long 的行动和反应以增强剧情连贯性。 (Sharp comment under 50 words: Initial promise of revenge plot is overshadowed by sidebar narrative about Bao Ge's test. Needs clearer protagonist-driven direction to maintain audience engagement.)
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2025-01-06

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Mfalme Askari asiye na rika

Mfalme Askari asiye na rika

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Wakati wa kukusanya：
2024-10-21 05:04:48
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Baada ya mauaji ya kikatili ya familia yake yote na fedheha ya kudhalilisha ya mchumba wake, alitoweka kwa miaka mitatu. Lakini sasa, aliibuka tena, akiwa amedhamiria kutafuta haki na kulipiza kisasi kwa wale waliomsababishia maumivu hayo.

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2025-01-06 23:21:27
The introduction sets up intense personal motivation for revenge, but the plot immediately diverges focusing on the group's dynamics instead of the protagonist’s actions or perspective. This disconnect弱化了主角的复仇动机，导致故事焦点不够明确。建议尽快引入 Xiao Long 的行动和反应以增强剧情连贯性。 (Sharp comment under 50 words: Initial promise of revenge plot is overshadowed by sidebar narrative about Bao Ge's test. Needs clearer protagonist-driven direction to maintain audience engagement.)
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