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Kisasi kilichofufuka

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Emira
**Comment:** While the premise of revenge is compelling, the sudden transformation from a frail patient to having "newfound strength" seems unrealistic without explanation. Additionally, the introduction implies consent was given for kidney donation, contradicting later revelations that it was non-consensual. Consistency and believable character development are needed.
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2025-01-05

Kama Mtumiaji Kama Mtumiaji of Kisasi kilichofufuka

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Kisasi kilichofufuka

Kisasi kilichofufuka

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Hidden Identity
Revenge
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2024-10-21 04:59:13
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Lea Holt anapunguza uhusiano na familia yake ili kuwa na mpenzi wake, Nick Gray. Miaka mitatu baadaye, Nick anakusanya deni kubwa. Ili kuwa karibu na familia tajiri ya Kent, anapanga figo ya Lea ivunwe, kwa kuwa inalingana na kile wanachohitaji. Kama vile Lea anakaribia kufa, ndugu zake watatu wenye nguvu wanamuokoa. Kwa uungwaji mkono wao, Lea anaanza njia isiyokoma ya kulipiza kisasi, akitumia nguvu zake mpya kurejesha uhai wake na kuwaangusha wale waliomdhulumu.

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Emira
2025-01-05 10:57:20
**Comment:** While the premise of revenge is compelling, the sudden transformation from a frail patient to having "newfound strength" seems unrealistic without explanation. Additionally, the introduction implies consent was given for kidney donation, contradicting later revelations that it was non-consensual. Consistency and believable character development are needed.
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